Inner Beauty **POTD 1-11-07
Of course, now that I go back and read this again, I'm left to wonder what to do about the repetition in stanza 2 line 3 .... There is a soft beauty that shines brightly from within. In the heart...
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Have you thought about "multicolored waves waving. . ." and then take waving out of the next line, but flow on into it? (Hope that makes sense.) It's a lovely scribe, though, Indigo. . .I don't know...
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Ah Laura, you haven't lost any of your talent. A mesmerizing work you shared there._________________________________________________ Musann All New All Metal ! The FieldsPoetry like you like! ...Read...
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Scorp, I had thought of 'multihued waving colours' but it just didn't seem to roll as nice while read. Thanks for the suggestion! I'll have to try it out. And thanks for reading me and the beautiful...
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Mirielle, thank you very much for taking a moment to read me! And the beautiful reply is much cherished! I wouldn't necessarily call it talent ... just an overwhelmed heart that constantly skips a...
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So very awesome to read you again, my friend!! And I see that happiness still infecting your pen! So very good to see!!
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no matter what you decide to do, this poem is awesome! WOW!
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dragon & psycho - thank you both much for reading this and the replies! y'alls words are most appreciated. dragon - it feels good too! to be able to look inside and feel the warmth of the sun....
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you don't need to make any changes....this is so warm and exquisite....i love it just the way that it is.....thank you so much.... alexis
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Enjoyed the imagery and uplifting tone this piece offers. I can see the blooms blossom in fullness. Each bud waving through the breeze. Nature is such a gift to us. Thanks for this share. **some...
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Good to see you back indigo, how about.."furls of colours" waving in the soft breeze... or "multicoloured pennants" waving in the soft breeze... enjoyed the read..it felt like spring. Hugs Sky
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Quote:just an overwhelmed heart that constantly skips a beat. Of that I have no doubt ~Smile~ Love glows in rainbows on you Laura, and it looks so beautiful on you in your poetry... ***Clapping***...
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This is a gorgeous write, Laura! These good folks before me have provided some awesome suggestions. You eliminated what my suggestions would have been....'multihued waving colours' . Whatever you...
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This is so beautiful! You dont have to change a thing, but if you want to, here's another suggestion Quote: In the heart there are meadows with dancing flowers in multicoloured waves flowing in the...
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Such beautiful imagery in this gem. Congratulations on POTD of the day. Richly deserving Lit with Kick!
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imagery was precise in this piece.. congrats on POTD. Hotep
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